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A Special Message Exclusively For
Customers, Seminar Attendees and Friends of Brett McFall Who Desperately Need
World Class Copywriting For Their Business
(But Don't Know Where To Turn).
 
From The Desk Of Brett McFall

Dear Friend,

My name is Brett McFall.

If you've come to this website you are very familiar with who I am, the work that I do, and the success I have had writing sales copy for clients. For instance you probably know about
“Fantastic! I have learnt so much from you Brett. I can now start as a consultant and charge more money - £1,000 a day compared to £400 a week!”
Trish Jones, UK

I have been getting the McFall Report for approximately 16 months now, so I knew you would over deliver on content, but I didn't think you'd give away that me many of your money making secrets (how wrong I was!) Brett totally OVERdelivered on every promise he made in his sales letter!
Scott Wilson, New Zealand

“Brett got my brain ticking with so many creative marketing and new business ideas that I could not wait to get off my backside and start making REAL money. My brain was running at such a full speed that in the plane back to Melbourne I was jotting down business ideas that I CAN NOW start over the web - POSSIBLE because of a SECRET of Brett's that is easy to implement for a Newby like me. Brett gave many simple business ideas and ways of marketing soooo freely that I am certain the money will come back in abundance once I implement them. Thanks Brett for being GENEROUSLY GIVING!!!”
Vanessa Tran, Australia -
0413 278 057


“Brett is a true motivator and got me thinking of heaps of ideas, just to get myself started. I got loads and loads of information and my poor little brain was ticking overtime. Action time 24 hours later, I put a website together using Brett's secret system and I'm testing and measuring my market for a new idea that came to mind during the seminar.”
Sharon Richards, Australia sharon_richards@telstra.com

“We’d only seen Brett on DVD and had a limited understanding of marketing and how to use the web as a vehicle for wealth creation. After just a one day session with Brett, our eyes have been opened to a whole new world that we’ve never before understood. Thanks Brett for making it all so easy to understand and access.”
Daniel Nuutinen and Linda Bradley, Australia

“Brett made everything so easy to understand. He captured my attention from the moment he walked on stage to the moment he left. Brett made me want to do something with my life!”
Nicole Golden, UK

"Brett is one the most influential and motivational speakers I have met in my entire life. He has his own style of dialogue delivery which jerks the audience out of all kinds of immobility and inspires them to focus and act on what is being taught. Brett has a raw energy which is infectious and makes its way right through to the heart and soul of the audience. He has the ability to interact one on one with every individual while he is addressing an audience of over 100s of listeners."
Prashant Welling, Al Garhoud, Dubai
What you may NOT know however is that I no longer consult to clients about their copywriting. In fact I have closed the books on my consulting business... and it's very, VERY rare that I will do any sort of consulting outside of my own businesses. And even then it is usually only at my full day consulting rate of $15,000.

The copy I write now is purely for myself and for my business partners.

Of course, this has created a problem for the legions of business owners that contact me every day asking for help with their sales copy. Most of the time I have to say, 'sorry, I can't help you'.

That was until now!

You see, that's all changed. Before I tell you the details however, you first need to know about...

The Early Evening Fax I Received At My Office

Some years ago, in the early evening while I was relaxing in my living room watching TV, I heard a fax come through to my home office.

It was from a budding copywriter who wanted to get my opinion on the quality of his copy. He wanted my help because he wasn't sure how strong his sales copy was, where it was weak, and how he could improve upon it.

To my delight I found this young 'copy cub's' writing was really quite good. Yes, there were holes in his work, but nothing more practice and focus wouldn't clear up.

And so the next day I phoned him to talk to him about what he sent me. I told him how he could improve it, and what he needed to DO to take his skills to the next level.

Well, to my surprise he went away and did exactly as I said (most copy cubs don't do the necessary work required to become skillful). Anyway, he studied... he worked... he tried harder and harder until I was happy to let him write actual copy for ME!

And he continued to produce spectacular results!

It has been a number of years since my first contact with this 'copy cub'. Since then he has gone onto become a truly successful copywriter in his own right.

Who am I speaking about? Well, his name is Alexi Neocleous. If you're an Australian business owner you're probably quite familiar with Alexi's copywriting exploits. He is one of the top copywriters in Australia, and is fast becoming very well known internationally, too.

In fact, his client list reads like a veritable who's who of the business world. Take a look for yourself:
blairsinger
$70,128 in a few weeks
One campaign Alexi worked on for me brought in over $70,128 in a few short weeks. If you want to turbo charge your sales and marketing, get him working on your business!”
Blair Singer
Bestselling author SalesDogs
And bestselling author, and very good (and sometimes whacky !) friend, Ed Burton...
$117,251.23 in sales
One sales letter he wrote for me brought in $$117,251.23! When I want my marketing to bring in huge $$$, I bring in Alexi."
Ed Burton
Bestselling author
burdon
And then you have Max Compton, CEO (and yes one of the nicest guys you will ever meet!) of one of the biggest producers of daytime television commercials in the country...
maxcompton
Tripled TV Response Leads
"Alexi wrote a TV ad that tripled our client's previous response rate. And just to show it was no fluke, he just did it again with another of our clients! Suffice to say I am extremely happy with the outcome!"
Max Compton
CEO
Infobreak
www.infobreak.com.au
And bestselling author (and all round nice guy) Hans Jakobi...
Potentially $237,384 in sales revenue
“Alexi’s sales letters sell! He has done a number of jobs for me now and I keep coming back for more. I’ve even had several customers ask me who my copywriter is because they were so impressed with his work. Just one of the advertisements Alexi has written for me has the potential of generating at least $237,384 in sales revenue over a 12 month period, if it keeps performing the way it has to date. Not only that, he shared an idea with me that I was able to use within minutes to slash my advertising costs in half in major publications. This one little known tip saved me $4,120 today and could save me a massive $98,880 over 12 months. If you don’t check out what Alexi has to teach you, you’ll probably be leaving money on the table instead of putting it in your pocket. I just hope he doesn’t tell you ALL the powerful strategies he taught me! (Just kidding!) He’s a great guy to work with. If you want to see what he wrote for me, go to www.RealEstateSecrets.com.au and check it out for yourself.
Hans Jakobi
Investor, Best-Selling Author and Australia’s Wealth Coach®
www.RealEstateSecrets.com.au
hans
christoper
And super successful bestselling author Chris Howard...
Best Selling Author
“I could have selected any of the world’s top advertising pros to write the copy for my new book. I chose Alexi because he’s the best I know. If you want your ads to make money, give him a call!”
Christopher Howard
CEO
The Christopher Howard Companies
www.powerofinfluence.com
And here is a comment by a truly special man, Brett McFall. For those that don't know, Brett is the one that opened many, MANY doors for me when I first started in this business and was there for me, offering advice on how to get better and better at writing copy (never asking for anything in return outside of requesting I pass it along when people came to me for help). As always thank you mate!
Killer Marketing Brain
“Very few people truly understand how to write ads that sell. Alexi is one of the exceptions. His copy is powerful and persuasive, and he is 100% dedicated to making you tens of thousands of dollars in sales. I have no hesitation in recommending his ‘killer’ marketing brain to anyone that wants to get all the customers they’ll ever need.”
Brett McFall,
Co-Founder of the World Internet Summit
www.brettmcfall.com
brettfall
And I could NEVER forget my good friend, multi-million bestselling author and a pioneer of the self help movement across the world, Dr Robert Anthony...
robert
One Of The Best Advertising Copywriters I Know
"As the bestselling author of over three million books, I have had the opportunity to work with some of the best advertising copywriters in the world. Out of that group, I would have to say Alexi is one of the most talented and results-producing copywriters I have met. His advice has always translated into increased sales and profits. I recommend him highly!"
Dr Robert Anthony
Bestselling Author
www.robertanthonyonline.com
And world famous direct mail maverick Vince James...
CEO Of a $100 Million Business
“Alexi is one of the best copywriters I've ever read. Certainly the BEST in Australia by far. Alexi is one of few writers I'd attach big advertising dollars to. If for some insane reason his ad does not work for you- it's not Alexi's fault... the fault is YOUR PRODUCT!"
Vince James
www.12-month-millionaire.com
Discover the hidden techniques of how I built a $100 Million
empire in 23 months!
vince
And here is what one of hit DVD "The Secret" co-stars, Joe Vitale, had to say about one of my marketing courses...
joe
Best of the Best
Whew! This is the best of the best --- a brilliant system designed to bring you double the profits, and in fact is GUARANTEED to do so. Get this!"
Joe Vitale,
#1 Best-Selling Author,
"Spiritual Marketing"
www.mrfire.com
And here is a comment from another awesome guy... 'surfer extraordinaire' Ash Day. Ash is Managing Director
of the Australian distribution arm of the world's #1 selling adjustable bed company.....
Blew Out Our Phone Lines... Best Ad Man I Know
"The TV ad Alexi wrote for us brought in 300% more leads. In fact, his campaign was so successful that our call centre couldn't handle the leads, blowing out the phone lines, and creating a follow up backlog of 5 days. We now have to computerise our lead taking so as to keep up with the influx of calls. Without a doubt Alexi is the best advertising guy I've worked with. I can't wait to see the results when we roll out the campaign across the country."
Ash Day
Managing Director
Craftmatic Australia
ashday

And then you have two of my sharpest clients and friends - 'Siamese Twins In Business' (because they've been in business together for so long) Mark Mahoney and Michael Fullick...
12.4% Response Rate at Only $5 Per Lead!
"We get Alexi to do all our sales copy, and he never lets us down. We just launched a new business and Alexi's copy hit gold again with a 12.4% response rate from our three step sequence at a cost per lead of only $5! We're now adding to our product line and are getting Alexi's brain onto those products, too. If you need an advertising expert that gets $$$ in your account, he is your man!"
Michael Fullick and Mark Mahoney
The Quantum Group

And of course, my comrade-in-arms, fellow copywriter and very good friend Scott Bywater, who, by the way, wisely laughed in my face when I suggested he name his new born baby after me...
Hire Alexi. Now!
"Alexi is one of the few copywriters in Australia that I would trust with my clients. If you want to get results with your advertising, hire Alexi. Now!"
Scott Bywater
www.copywritingthatsells.com.au
scot
And two of my closest friends Sandra and Daniel Biskind...
sandrata
95% Conversion Rate
“Because of the ad Alexi wrote for us, 95% of people who phone our office (from his ad) attend our events. This is exceptional. In addition, it has slashed the time spent speaking to prospective attendees by 50%”
Sandra and Daniel Biskind
www.heartpower.net
And Dr Steven W Griffith...
Business Doubled In 5 Months
“From one ad Alexi wrote, my business has doubled within 5 months. What a relief not to struggle with whom to pay or not to pay. My business suppliers now get paid early, and my personal spending has reduced. We our now saving and investing in our business. I am rapt! My wife is thrilled at our financial position, and I feel relieved at the enormity of stress from being in business after nineteen years, an ad can do so much. I highly recommend Alexi’s services.”
Dr Steven W Griffith
Redcliffe Chiropractic Centre
And Phil Mowbray...
Conversion Rate Skyrockets
“From incorporating only a small section of Alexi’s copy into our existing enquiry letter, our business increased by about 30%. But the real gain is that we do HALF AS MANY quotes for the same income. So our conversion rate is much higher. We can’t wait to put all his copy into action. We’re very excited.”
Phil Mowbray
Enviro Floors
And the lovely Kayleen Lorenzo, and her awesome husband Fran...
A Conservative $66,000
If all goes to plan, a referral letter Alexi wrote for us will bring in $42,000 in lifetime profits, for an investment of a few hundred dollars in printing. Amazing! Not only that, a simple idea he just gave us (while I was cutting his hair!) will add a clear $12,000 to our bottom line... and quite possibly $24,000 with a BIT of extra effort. This pays for our daughter's private school fees... and a nice overseas family holiday every year! All told this is a very conservative $66,000!"
Kayleen Lorenzo
Industry Hairdressing
And former gym owner Gary Rigby...
$32,796 in sales
“Alexi wrote a simple three step letter campaign to our past members. In just 10 weeks I’m happy to report it brought in over $32,796 in sales. But it doesn’t end there. If we factor in the life value of our average member, this campaign is actually worth at least $60,000 to my business. I couldn’t be happier, and not surprising, I’m looking to hire Alexi for another project. Get this guy’s brain on your business.”
Gary Rigby
Managing Director
Alive Gym and Fitness
And Jackie Parkinson...
Sold business within 24 hours for FULL asking price
"I had my business up for sale for more than six months. Business brokers told me they could sell it and had the skills to write a great ad (they are after all so–called professionals who do this for a living every day.) After constant disappointment and thousands of dollars down the drain on advertising, nothing worked.

I hesitated when I was given your number because I was doubtful that anyone could sell my business, but I eventually called. You wrote me a fabulous eye-catching, exciting, punchy ad, and… Guess what??? I sold my business on the same day for the full asking price and the response was huge – more than sixty calls and still counting! I can’t thank you enough, if only I had called you six months ago!!!"
Jackie Parkinson
The Jilted Anchovy
And Neil Asher...
$162,000 in sales in just 3 months
I am CEO of a rapidly growing business. I was worried that I would waste my money on the ideas of yet another ‘pretend expert’.
me $5700 to implement. That’s a whopping 2,840% return on investment! I highly recommend yo
I decided to give Alexi a try. Almost instantly I knew my marketing was in safe hands. Just one of Alexi’s ideas brought in an extra $162,000 in sales in just 3 months. But best of all, they only cost u use Alexi’s marketing brain if you want to turbo charge your sales and profits.”
Neil Asher
New Insights
neilasher
And then you have pharmacist Paul Sidhom someone I respectfully call a 'marketing anomaly', largely due to his entrepreneurial flair in a conservative industry, (mate, you would have done extraordinary without my help!)...
25% Response Rate and $200,000 In Revenue
"A three step sales letter sequence Alexi wrote for me pulled in a response rate of 25% (which is extraordinary considering I sell a $2,500 product). Thus far his copy has helped me bring in almost $200,000 in revenue - far exceeding my yearly goal! I couldn't be
happier. I have since hired him for more projects".
Paul Sidhom
Founder - IPAG
www.ipag.biz
I am proud to say Alexi is the BEST student that I have mentored.

An Idea Is Born

Anyway, Alexi and I were recently talking about the need for my seminar attendees, clients and friends to have access to world class copywriting (now that I am retired).

Sure, I told him, there are excellent copywriters to be found both offline, and online, but so few that I have worked with on a personal, private one-on-one basis. And even fewer that I helped mentor and train to become extraordinary in their own right.

Alexi is of course at the top of that list.

That's why I was more than happy at his suggestion to set up a special consulting service exclusively for my friends, seminar attendees and clients!

Of course, being extremely busy with his own clients and projects, Alexi knew he couldn't possible handle all the demand that he'd be swamped with.

So what he did was pull together a team of truly talented copywriters in their own right, and agreed to personally project manage every single client that I send.

This way I have 100% confidence that anybody I send is getting the highest quality copywriting possible. And for you, as a copywriting client get killer copy for your business.

What does 'project manage' mean?

It means is Alexi will be intimately involved in all stages of your copy. Nothing will go to print until he has gone through every word, headline, and subhead of your letter to guarantee the fin bvished product is world class.

It's virtually as good as getting his expert hand on their entire copy piece.

Special Offer Only for Referrals of Brett McFall – FREE 30 Minute Consultation Valued at $300

And there is something else that Alexi is willing to offer to anybody that is referred by me.

It's something Alexi doesn't even offer it on his OWN website! So please treat what you're about to be offered with the respect it deserves.

Anyway, here's the deal:

If you have a budget more than $3000 AND you have attended one of my programs, or purchased one of my courses in the past you will be eligible for a...

FREE 30 Minute Consultation Of Your Advertising!


What this means is either Alexi (if he is available), or a member of his skilled copywriting team (more likely) will meet with you over the phone for half an hour and give you advice and feedback on your ad. They will give you suggestions on how to improve your headline, your offer, your layout, your opening copy, your subhead... anything and everything to make your bring in the $$$.
And it will be at NO charge.

So this is a very real value of $300 which I know you will get a lot out of.

But you must meet the qualification criteria.

Sound fair?

OK, if you need help with the copy of your business you will need to fill in the form below. Once you do an email will be sent to Alexi's office, who will then either follow up personally, or have a member of his team contact you directly. At that stage, a time will be organised to speak to you about your needs, and to organise your complimentary 30 minute consultation valued at $300.
Warmly,
Brett McFall

PS Please keep this website PRIVATE! Alexi and his team do NOT offer FREE consultations to ANYBODY else. It is ONLY for friends, seminar attendees and clients of mine.

PPS Alexi and his team may even ask for evidence that you are a customer or friend of mine. So, please, keep it honest.

If you need help with crafting a killer sales letter for your website... email blast... copy for your website's landing page... flash presentation... autoresponder series...

Or any type of sales copy for an OFFLINE business e.g. direct mail letter, magalog, advertorial etc., fill out the form below and we'll get back to you asap!

Please note to be eligible for the FREE consultation you must have a copywriting budget of $3000 or more, and $1000 for a complete critique consultation.

Fill out this form and we'll respond within 24-48 hours. Since computers and connections can go down, to ensure you don't lose your information, and if you're entering quite a bit of data, we highly recommend that you save it in a separate file first, like a text editor, just in case.

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